High-rise buildings destroy the character of a city. Not only should new ones be banned but existing ones should be demolished and replaced with smaller buildings. To what extent do you agree?

In the middle of the twentieth century, cities around the world began constructing huge numbers of high-rise buildings. These have proven very unpopular in places like the United Kingdom, where people consider them visually offensive, and some people have called for them to be banned and even torn down.
This
essay will partly agree with
this
sentiment. High-rise buildings are unpopular for a number of reasons.
First
of all, they force people to live in confined conditions that are completely unnatural for human beings, and in
such
conditions disease, poverty, and crime all flourish. One just needs to look at the tower blocks of London, Brooklyn, or Johannesburg to see how unpleasant and dehumanising these places can be. Beyond that, they are
also
unattractive, which is a problem because they block out the
sky or
Accept comma addition
sky, or
the mountains, meaning that people feel repressed by their proximity. For these reasons and more, they should definitely be banned and demolished in order to improve the urban environment.
However
, there are
also
some opposing factors to consider and some of these are quite convincing. The primary argument from
this
perspective is that
such
buildings are essential to house growing
populations even
Accept comma addition
populations, even
if they are aesthetically offensive or even rife with crime. In much of the developing world, people are happy to live in
this
sort of accommodation because it allows them to reside in the city, where there are job opportunities and access to other important facilities. Even if these buildings are unattractive and dangerous, it is still more important to have a home. As
such
, the issue is a little more complex than it
initially
seems. In conclusion, high-rise buildings are unattractive and cause numerous social problems, but they are unfortunately a necessity in some parts of the world. It would be reasonable to ban them and demolish them in developed countries, but other places may need to embrace them for a few more decades.
Submitted by Aditya on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: