Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
Due to
technology
advancements, people beome
increasingly isolated as the enter or assume a certain state or condition
become
technology
replaced face to face communication. The essay will elaborate how technology
created positive and negative
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a positive and negative impact
impact
on our life.
Undouthbly
, with an increasely
demand of technology
has replaced human labour in industrialisation company and bring positive impact
on better productivity in bussines industry
. Suggestion
the business industry
business industry
Moreover
, technogy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
has
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has also improved
also
improve better communication in
the company and the Suggestion
between
use
of mass media to advertise on
the products Suggestion
for
about
throught
social media in the entertainment industry. from beginning to end
through
For example
, use
of technology
has reduced number
of employees to replace with the Suggestion
the number
use
of heavy machinary
which has better productivity for machines or machine systems collectively
machinery
company
. Suggestion
the company
companies
Technology
become
part of mankind which Suggestion
becomes
ensure
life is much more convenient and more Suggestion
ensures
confortable
.
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
On the other hand
, people become more isolated due to an increase use
of social media which
cause negative Accept comma addition
media, which
impact
on social interaction with others. Mass media has portrays
positive and negative Suggestion
portrays
has portrayed
is portraying
portrayed
portray
have portrayed
immages
on social media and television. an iconic mental representation
images
For instance
, social media, news, and videos has made
a huge negative Suggestion
have made
impact
on people emotional and mental development as the result of these portrays negative influence
on Suggestion
the negative influence
audience
, because of that, people become more depressed and withdrawn from society Suggestion
the audience
dut
to excessive introduces something in contrast or unexpected
but
debt
use
of technology
.
To conclude, excessive use
of technology
with restrict the contents can influence people in either positive and negative ways. Goverment
must spend more time on censor violence and aggression some content for Suggestion
Government
appropriate age group
, Suggestion
the appropriate age group
in addition
to that, employer and bussiness
should block social media sites in the a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
work place
and is appropriate to age group.a place where work is done
workplace
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