It is argued that governments should levy a tariff on junk food because the number of health risks associated with consuming this kind of food is on the rise. This essay agrees that a higher rate of tax should be paid by fast-food companies. Firstly, alcohol and tobacco companies already pay higher taxes and secondly, higher taxes could raise prices and lower consumption.

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Higher excise on
liqueur
an alcoholic beverage that is distilled rather than fermented
liquor
and cigarettes has proven to be successful at curbing the harm caused by these substances.
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revenue has been used to treat health problems associated with these products and has proven useful in advertising campaigns warning people about the dangers of alcohol and tobacco abuse. Tax from fast
food
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could be used in the same way. The United Kingdom is a prime example, where money from smokers is used to treat lung cancer and heart disease. Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption. Fast
food
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companies would pass on these taxes to consumers in the form of higher prices and
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would lead to people not being able to afford junk
food
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because it is too expensive. Junk
food
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would soon become a luxury item and it would only be consumed occasionally, which would be less harmful to the general public’s health.
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, the cost of organic
food
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has proven prohibitively expensive for most people and
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why only a small percentage of the population
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buys
it regularly. In conclusion, junk
food
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should be taxed at a higher rate because of the good precedent set by alcohol and tobacco and the fact that the increased cost should reduce the amount of fast-
food
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people buy.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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