Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?
There is no shadow of
doubt
that housing areas Add an article
a doubt
has
aroused a lot of debates and conversations around it. Change the verb form
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Although
some people opine that cities should create taller buildings
, other
believe that building places should be on a wider place. Fix the agreement mistake
others
This
essay will discuss the merits of both the
views in detail and provide Correct article usage
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the
opinion Correct article usage
an
at the end
. Admittedly, there are various benefits of constructing larger buildings
. Firstly
, already cities were running out of land, so they can
save the same if they Wrong verb form
could
build
larger Wrong verb form
built
buildings
. To put in
another way, one tall building can have a capacity to accommodate roughly 250 families. Another reason that needs to be considered is, Correct your spelling
it
building
construction is cheap when compared to any other Correct word choice
that building
buildings
. Fix the agreement mistake
building
In other words
, the construction cost of the build
is solely divided among individual flat owners. In India, Replace the word
building
for example
, people prefer to live in an apartment because of the benefits it provides. In short, saving land and money is the ultimate advantage of higher buildings
. Despite the advantages above, there are serious disadvantages of
constructing high Change preposition
to
buildings
. One possible issue would be safety
of residents should be considered. It is the responsibility of the building management to provide Add an article
the safety
the
several Correct article usage
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safety
measures in order to escape from the
accidents like fire. Correct article usage
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For example
, it would be difficult to use when the fire is set, but this
issue can be easily sorted out in the wider buildings
. While
constructing the wider homes safety
of the individual is assured. Although
wider home owners
should bear the expenses of construction and house tax, Correct your spelling
homeowners
safety
of the people is assured in Add an article
the safety
wider
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the wider
home
. What is more? There is no neighbourhood problem. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
Therefore
, comparable to tall building
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buildings
safety
is achieved only in the wider buildings
. To conclude
, this
essay has discussed the merits of both the
views. Correct article usage
apply
Thus
, in my opinion, of course, tall buildings
can save the
money and cost; Correct article usage
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however
, wider
building provides more Add an article
the wider
safety
and convenience.Submitted by suresh kumaran on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion