Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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With regularly encountering the advent of modern technologies and amendments
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undergoing changes in
life
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is
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has been
often commonplace for people nowadays.
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while some people believe that living in the same way without changes is acceptable
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I agree with those who feel that changes are always preferable. 46 On the one hand
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it could be argued that living with
standart
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lifestyle has
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
on certain ways of
life
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.Those who live in stable
life
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are often said to become conversant with their jobs and lives
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
of constantly focusing on the same subject that it can give them a sense of confidence and self-esteem.
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some believe that living
in stability
an unstable order
instability
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with the exception of taking
risk
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risks
or change
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coukd
requests polite permission
could
prevent them from
negativ
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
outcomes
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for instance
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being redundant and homeless and it would be
the safer
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the safest
way of living.
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I would argue that adapting new points to
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has more merits compared to steadiness.
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being on different workplaces and residing in new towns probably make your
life
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full of adventures that can affect your
prespective
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspective
prospective
to new things and improve your optimistic outlook on
life
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.I hold the opinion that due to switching
job
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jobs
to another
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people tend to learn
variety
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a variety
of new skills that often means keeping in touch with different sorts of people.
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not only can
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help people broaden their knowledge about professions
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but it can
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influence their social aspects positively. In conclusion
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although
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some people are versed in their qualification because if living without major alterations
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living
steadiliy
at a steady rate or pace
steadily
seem to prevent people from more benefits.
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I believe that it is quite reasonable to take changes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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