Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that offspring should be motivated by their parents to attend social groups to do different activities in their spare
time
whereas another group of people think children should spend their time
solo and keep themselves busy. I agree with social activities belief
and I will talk about both views.
Nowadays, being in social environment help children improve their skills and to be more successful in their personal life. Suggestion
the social activities belief
In other words
, they are getting used to be in the society and better understanding about others, also
respect people opinion
even if they disagree. If there are some choices to be voted in group activity, should take part in what was chosen by Suggestion
a person's opinion
person's opinion
peoples' opinion
peoples opinion
majority
, even though they are not keen on the selected activity. So, it is valuable that children be engaged in group work and improve their understanding and social acceptance.
Suggestion
the majority
a majority
On the other hand
, it is vital children be
independent and amused themselves in their leisure Suggestion
are
time
. There are variety
of programs and software either to be entertained with or taught. It depends what children are keen on. Suggestion
a variety
For example
, interest in learning new language
to grow personal skill can be their desire, so many videos on YouTube and more importantly, different self-learning applications are available to be used at home. Suggestion
a new language
new languages
Moreover
, there are plenty of E-books on the internet that can be download
for free or a little amount of money. Suggestion
downloaded
That is
why there is
no doubt children should occupy on their own.
In conclusion, Suggestion
are
although
children can be entertained by themselves, I believe young people should attend in groups activities
and team works in their spare Accept comma addition
groups, activities
time
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