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Children nowadays watch significantly more television than in the past,which reduces their activity levels accordingly.why is this the case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children?

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In
this
day
 and age pupils are watching regular
tv
 shows without doing other work.
They
Suggestion
Their
 all children are
watch
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watching
tv
hole
day
 without eating and doing some other activities.
watching
Suggestion
Watching
tv
Suggestion
TV
 is not good for children physical and
mentally
Suggestion
mental
 health.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will discuss some of causes of watching
tv
 and how to overcome in following paragraphs. The
first
 and foremost reason is that watching
tv
hole
day
 take bad effect on
children eyes
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the child's eyes
child's eyes
children's eyes
 because
tv screen
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the tv screen
 produced ultra
voilent
acting with or marked by or resulting from great force or energy or emotional intensity
violent
 rays which is very bad for eye sight. Children are watching
tv
 daily 5 to 8 hours daily its
bad
Suggestion
worst
 for child health and physical
developmental
Suggestion
development
. They not do proper their study and waste their important
time
 on watching cartons and other serial on
tv
.
Accept space
.
 Nowadays everyone has a
tv
 in their
home but
Accept comma addition
home, but
 in the
past there
Accept comma addition
past, there
 are not
tv
 and other gadgets in the home so that by children spend their
time
 on proper thing in
past
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the past
.
in
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In
 traditional
time
 most of
people
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the people
 are not educated so they
no
be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about
know
 about
this things
Suggestion
these things
this thing
.
Accept space
.
 The lots of solutions are helpful
to overcome of
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to overcome this
this
 problem and encourage to other activities. Children should make their
hole
 daily routine chat with all activities and do
regular
Suggestion
regularly
then
 they
mantain
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
mention
maintained
 proper
time
.
Accept space
.
children
Suggestion
Children
 are read real story books and other traditional and
adventures
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adventure
book
Accept comma addition
book, then
then
 they can gain their knowledge and easily connect with
teir
of them or themselves
their
rits
an established ceremony prescribed by a religion
rites
roots
 and rituals. Children do spend
teir
of them or themselves
their
there
 hectic
time
 on sports because
this
feld
a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed
field
feed
felt
make
Suggestion
makes
 men strong and
physical
Suggestion
physically
 fit. With the
asist
give help or assistance; be of service
assist
exist
asset
 of
spots
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sports
feld
a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed
field
filled
feed
 they can show their
hiden
not accessible to view
hidden
telent
natural abilities or qualities
talent
talents
 with others and achieve a good platform. To conclude, watching
tv
hole
day
 not good for child health it creates lots of
helth
a form of energy that is transferred by a difference in temperature
heat
relatied
being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics
related
 issues in children and make child introvert as well as stubborn. If children see
tv
Suggestion
the tv hole day
hole
day
 they lose their academic scores and worry about their carrier
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  • digital platforms
  • on-demand streaming services
  • babysitting
  • marketing
  • urban environments
  • structured screen time
  • physical activity
  • treasure hunts
  • educational campaigns
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