In many countries today, people in cities either rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Following the number of
population
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the population
who prefers to live only in the
one
or two generations are increasing, the traditional family formats are demolished. To illustrate my point, I think the trend is a natural phenomenon
by
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of
changing the people's preference and behaviour. Admittedly, I partly agree that extended families have several benefits, In the
first
place, from the perspective of budgets, living with grandparents can be
the good
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better
the best
ways to save living costs.
For example
, nowadays, the living cost in the urban is alarmingly high,
therefore
, many married couple
choose
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chooses
to work for getting double pay checks,
however
, there is a
probelm
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
that no
one
can take a child during the daytime. When it comes
to live
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to living
with grandparents, they will take care of their grandchildren and
also
will help some chores,
consequently
, the family can save the money for day care centres, and housekeeping Services.
Additionally
, from the perspective of kids, they can learn valuable wisdoms or traditional etiquette through a grandfather and mother.
Nevertheless
, I, as
one
of the supporter of the view, think that a single-family or family that only live with young kids is preferred these days.
First
of all, it is true that capital cities have a lot of entertainments, conveniences, and working places. Young generations a definite like to stay in
centre
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the centre
of the society, on the flip side, older generations are willing to stay in a hometown, usually in a rural area. From the view of them, they will get suffering from high-rated buildings and polluted air in the urban.
Hence
, it is a natural way that older people and their married children live separately. Another reason worth mentioning is that a change of
vaules
beliefs of a person or social group in which they have an emotional investment (either for or against something)
values
, which means people more prioritise individual's life than family life. More specifically, modern citizens are empathize the healing which is relaxation time at home, as the result, if a person
live
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lives
with their larger families,
then
it is hard to relax and having a time to chill alone. In conclusion, through the social changes, especially empathising personal values, populations prefer to live alone or living with their young kids.
Although
, there are
economical
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economic
benefits when citizens choose to stay with their parents, modern individuals want to keep their work-life balances and respect
needs
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the needs
of each family
members
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member
. I personally have a positive aspect
in
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of
this
issues
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issue
, and it is
one
of the social phenomenon.
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