In many countries today, people in cities either rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Following the number of
population
who prefers to live only in the Suggestion
the population
one
or two generations are increasing, the traditional family formats are demolished. To illustrate my point, I think the trend is a natural phenomenon by
changing the people's preference and behaviour.
Admittedly, I partly agree that extended families have several benefits, In the Suggestion
of
first
place, from the perspective of budgets, living with grandparents can be the good
ways to save living costs. Suggestion
better
the best
For example
, nowadays, the living cost in the urban is alarmingly high, therefore
, many married couple choose
to work for getting double pay checks, Suggestion
chooses
however
, there is a probelm
that no a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
one
can take a child during the daytime. When it comes to live
with grandparents, they will take care of their grandchildren and Suggestion
to living
also
will help some chores, consequently
, the family can save the money for day care centres, and housekeeping Services. Additionally
, from the perspective of kids, they can learn valuable wisdoms or traditional etiquette through a grandfather and mother.
Nevertheless
, I, as one
of the supporter of the view, think that a single-family or family that only live with young kids is preferred these days. First
of all, it is true that capital cities have a lot of entertainments, conveniences, and working places. Young generations a definite like to stay in centre
of the society, on the flip side, older generations are willing to stay in a hometown, usually in a rural area. From the view of them, they will get suffering from high-rated buildings and polluted air in the urban. Suggestion
the centre
Hence
, it is a natural way that older people and their married children live separately. Another reason worth mentioning is that a change of vaules
, which means people more prioritise individual's life than family life. More specifically, modern citizens are empathize the healing which is relaxation time at home, as the result, if a person beliefs of a person or social group in which they have an emotional investment (either for or against something)
values
live
with their larger families, Suggestion
lives
then
it is hard to relax and having a time to chill alone.
In conclusion, through the social changes, especially empathising personal values, populations prefer to live alone or living with their young kids. Although
, there are economical
benefits when citizens choose to stay with their parents, modern individuals want to keep their work-life balances and respect Suggestion
economic
needs
of each family Suggestion
the needs
members
. I personally have a positive aspect Suggestion
member
in
Suggestion
of
this
issues
, and it is Suggestion
issue
one
of the social phenomenon.Submitted by Damul Yang on
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