Some people think parents should supervise their children's activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Parenting is a daunting task, which has been undergoing rapid changes due to evolving behavioural patterns' in children. I strongly believe, that children's activities should be closely monitored to avoid unforeseen circumstances. While, some may deny and

this

as breaching their privacy. Children are tender and fragile during their early years of life. The way parents nurture them has a great impact on carving their

furure

the time yet to come

future

. These young minds are plain and highly receptive. Some parents believe that

this

is the

right

age to impart proper behavioural manners, punctuality and responsibility which can be succeeded by virtue of supervising their day-to-day tasks.

This

helps parents to correct them

right

away and guide them

accordingly

. Needless to say,

this

kind of

parenting we

Accept comma addition

parenting, we

can notice in people of Indian origin. There is another school of thought, where children are left to take decisions on their own and act on their free will.

This

will indirectly

helps

Suggestion

help

them in enhancing their decision-making capacity and makes them self-made. They will learn from their mistakes.

This

way, children can protect their self-identity. Most of the western countries' parents support

this

idea and they feel that they are giving their children a world full of opportunities to choose. They

also

believe that,

this

helps their self-esteem which leads to creative thinking rather than spoon-feeding

right

from the beginning. According to my view,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

firmly support that childhood should not be left unattended.

Parents

Suggestion

Parental

Parent

guidance is mandatory and

this

shouldn't be considered as encroachment of their independence. Admonishing at the

right

time is better than repenting. To

sumup

Suggestion

sum up

, paying keen attention to children's daily tasks by parents makes them evolve into a successful person.