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Some people think parents should supervise their children's activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Parenting is a daunting task, which has been undergoing rapid changes due to evolving behavioural patterns' in children. I strongly believe, that children's activities should be closely monitored to avoid unforeseen circumstances. While, some may deny and
this
 as breaching their privacy. Children are tender and fragile during their early years of life. The way parents nurture them has a great impact on carving their
furure
the time yet to come
future
. These young minds are plain and highly receptive. Some parents believe that
this
 is the
right
 age to impart proper behavioural manners, punctuality and responsibility which can be succeeded by virtue of supervising their day-to-day tasks.
This
 helps parents to correct them
right
 away and guide them
accordingly
. Needless to say,
this
 kind of
parenting we
Accept comma addition
parenting, we
 can notice in people of Indian origin. There is another school of thought, where children are left to take decisions on their own and act on their free will.
This
 will indirectly
helps
Suggestion
help
 them in enhancing their decision-making capacity and makes them self-made. They will learn from their mistakes.
This
 way, children can protect their self-identity. Most of the western countries' parents support
this
 idea and they feel that they are giving their children a world full of opportunities to choose. They
also
 believe that,
this
 helps their self-esteem which leads to creative thinking rather than spoon-feeding
right
 from the beginning. According to my view,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 firmly support that childhood should not be left unattended.
Parents
Suggestion
Parental
Parent
 guidance is mandatory and
this
 shouldn't be considered as encroachment of their independence. Admonishing at the
right
 time is better than repenting. To
sumup
Suggestion
sum up
, paying keen attention to children's daily tasks by parents makes them evolve into a successful person.
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