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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent u agree or disagree?

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In
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 contemporary world, it is undoubtedly true that everyone wishes to do something good for the society to improve the living standards for all. Some people concur that unpaid social service is to be made mandatory aspect of high school programs.
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, I partially agree with
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 statement as I believe that it should be
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's own desire to work
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in
 the
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
.
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 of the most conspicuous aspects of working compulsorily for the
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
 welfare is that it helps people realise their prime duty towards the betterment of society. By doing
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, not only can
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 be a good citizen, but
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 can
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 inspire others to be the same.
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 among many. Testified from the fact, a myriad of schools have started working on the "Swacch Bharat Abhiyaan", a scheme launched by the Prime Minister in India, to make our surroundings neat and clean. Needless to say, all these merits stand students in good stead when it comes to doing something incredible for their nation.
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, by working compulsorily for community services, students can lack time
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provide
 for studies. With
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, they sometimes end up scoring low grades in academics. Only when students follow mandatory unpaid services, will they loosen up interest in studies. According to statistics, youngsters who are into multiple tasks
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 as studies, NGO's, charities, become unable to give their focus and concentration towards academics. Undoubtedly, these aspects can make students' studies suffer. From the views outlined above, it can be concluded that
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 working voluntarily for
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's community make
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 a responsible citizen, but at the same time making it a mandatory part of higher studies will definitely affect studies and grades, as it should be
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's self desire to work for the community rather than a compulsion.
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