Nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is considered by most of the schools these days to market unhealthy and high sugar drinks to children in order to gain profit. In my opinion, there are more repercussions with
this
strategy as children might suffer from health problems by consuming junk Linking Words
food
. Use synonyms
However
, I Linking Words
also
think that there are a few beneficial points Linking Words
also
.
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First
of all, schools need to monitor their children's eating habits Linking Words
in addition
to their academic studies. By selling junk Linking Words
food
and high-calorie drink, children get used to an unhealthy lifestyle. These types of diets contain a lesser amount of nutrition, which is essential for the mental and physical Use synonyms
development
of children. Use synonyms
As a result
, children suffer from chronic diseases, Linking Words
such
as diabetes, obesity at a very young age. Linking Words
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, by having junk Linking Words
food
stalls on school premises, children will not be able to learn the difference between good and bad things. Use synonyms
Therefore
, schools should take proactive action to prevent Linking Words
such
shops and stalls, which can deter children's overall Linking Words
development
.
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Nevertheless
, there are a few benefits Linking Words
also
, which can be considered as a positive sign of Linking Words
development
. Setting up Use synonyms
shops
in school will help children to learn Suggestion
shop
monetary
skills. They will learn the value of money and will develop the habit of saving money. Suggestion
money
Moreover
, schools will get funds from Linking Words
food
companies, which can be used in the Use synonyms
development
of classes and sports facilities at Use synonyms
school
. Take, Suggestion
the school
schools
for example
, these days; many top beverage companies are collaborating with schools to increase their sales. Linking Words
This
is beneficial to both parties. Linking Words
Therefore
, schools should strictly encourage only those shops, which serve only healthy Linking Words
food
and drinks.
To conclude, While many schools opine that it is profitable to them, there are still more detrimental effects associated with it. Schools should only encourage healthy and nutritious Use synonyms
food
on their campus; in Use synonyms
this
way, it will be a positive Linking Words
development
for both schools and children.Use synonyms
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