You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to you regarding a potential job you have in one of your restaurants. My name is Bishoy, I was sitting

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to you on the flight that was heading to Perth, Australia from Ontario, Canada on the 7th of July. We discussed your new

restaurant

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in Ontario, which will be specialized in Chinese cuisine, and you asked me to contact you to discuss a job offer. I would like to work as a cooker in your new

restaurant

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. I am relocating to Ontario from Australia with my wife and my child. I believe that my qualifications and experience would be of great benefit to your business. I have a vocational certificate in Chinese cuisine from Perth General college. I spent 5 years in China working as an assistant cooker in a fine

restaurant

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in Bejing. After that, I opened my

restaurant

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when I went back to Australia and I have been working in it since

then

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. I hope you could arrange a specific timing to

further

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discuss my qualifications. I look forward to receiving your reply, Yours faithfully, Bishoy Yousef

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

professional advancement
cross-cultural collaboration
headquarters/ head office
global perspective
remote work
temporary assignment
team dynamics
networking opportunities
cultural immersion
succession planning
collaborative tools
time zone coordination
corporate hierarchy
relocation logistics
work-life balance
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