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Most of the people has
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an opinion
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the opinion
opinions
mobile phone
should be regulated in public places. In my Suggestion
mobile phones
a mobile phone
openion
, Mobile devices are now a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
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essential part
of our life. Banning devices in public places Suggestion
an essential part
creates
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life, but
such
regulation.
Firstly
, we have observed that usage of mobile devices are increased
dramatically in Suggestion
increasing
last couple
of years. If we can observe now a day, any public place like a public transport, a park, a Suggestion
the last couple
resturant
or even a library, most of the a building where people go to eat
restaurant
poeple
are steering on their phone. It is widely (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
observered
that people are reading news or chatting discovered or determined by scientific observation
observed
on
social media or playing games on their mobile phone. If we can observe the same Suggestion
about
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before the mobile an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
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, people of having a period marked by distinctive character or reckoned from a fixed point or event
era
area
conversation
with different people while Suggestion
conversations
a conversation
traveling
on public transport or reading books to the act of going from one place to another
travelling
overcomes
boredom. We cannot Suggestion
overcome
ingnore
the negative impact of mobile devices on our social life.
On refuse to acknowledge
ignore
other hand
, Mobile devices are now Suggestion
the other hand
main source
of our communication system. Most of the Suggestion
the main source
a main source
bussiness
are dependant on mobile devices. We cannot ignore the importance of mobile to have in a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
businesses
public place
for a doctor or a Suggestion
a public place
police man
. Even most of a member of a police force
policeman
bussiness
communication is a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
now a days
over the mobile devices. So it is very unlikely that it should be the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
bannned
in the public forbidden by law
banned
paces
because a point located with respect to surface features of some region
places
this
will impact on the bussiness
and emergency services.
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business
businesses
on
mobile devices should not be done by the Suggestion
of
government but
the people who are using it. Accept comma addition
government, but
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will create the balance between the people who really required the device all the time because of the nature of job
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