Some people believe that reading stories from e book better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It's argued that reading fictions through technological devices is more beneficial for children in
compared
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comparison
with
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to
watching the entertainment box or playing video games.
Although
I concur with the above mentioned idea, I think playing video games or watching
tv
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TV
can be useful to some extent. On the one hand, children reading e-book stories can experience many positive results. Arousing a passion towards
literature
is an instance. If children constantly read e-book fictions, they will acquaint with basics of
literature
and may feel a tendency toward writing. As many prominent writers have been become fond of writing in
this
way.
For example
Hushang Moradi, a great Iranian writer states:"I
felt
cause to fall by or as if by delivering a blow
fell
in love with
literature
when I was 10 by reading story books".
Moreover
, reading e-book stories can contribute to improve children's imagination. Since story books include plenty of fictional characters and locations, they may cause children to foster their mind power.
For
instance it's
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instance, it's
apparent reading a story written in sci-fi genre would stimulate
children's mind
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a child's mind
child's mind
the child's mind
a lot.
On the other hand
, playing
computer
games or watching television can be advantageous too. Children can keep abreast of the newest technology by playing with
computer
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computers
the computer
. Since playing
computer
games requires basic skills of technology, children would become familiar
on
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with
computer
skills.
Likewise watching
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Likewise, watching
tv
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TV
can be useful for children if it is under parent's supervision. If children watch beneficial
tv
programs not
addictively
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objective
objectively
, they could accumulate a large amount of knowledge. To conclude,
although
reading stories on
computer
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the computer
a computer
has more significant benefits for children
such
as making them interested in
literature
and promoting their
imagination
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imaginative
power, playing
computer
games can help them to become
skillful
on technological gadgets and watching
tv
would help them to boost their level of knowledge.
Submitted by Azin on

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