Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their family for a longer time. Which of these solutions do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

All men agree that
life
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is so
hard but
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hard, but
they differ about where and with
who
objective case of "who" ("who" is also often used in the objective)
whom
you will be live. At
this
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point, there are two opinions which are living with your family or without/not. I agree with living with our parents for two reasons.
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, the essential reason for living with our parents is feeling safe and comfortable because it is an important sensation and we cannot feel it without them. As they are elder than us they have more experience in
life
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, in resolutions, and in relations. So
for example
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, if our parents said that our friends are petulant it will be true. As well as, they give us their opinions and advice even we asked them because they wish the best for us. There are many stories about
that but
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that, but
my personal experience is found in a STEM school. When I
have joined
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joined
STEM it was in another city and I could not see them all
week so
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week, so
when I go back to the home I feel comfortable. Sometimes, after I have finished my exam or when I feel
sick I
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sick, I
want to hug
them but
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them, but
I
did not found
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have not found
them it
is
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was
a bad feeling. The end of
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point that there is no one will love us all the
time
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when we feel powerless, happy,
cheerless
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cheerful
cheery
, and exacting except our parents.
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, our parents consider as the main and
first
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supporters in
life
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for us.
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, we needed to be with them lots of our
time
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as if we failed in the exam, did not join our
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
Feld, did not join the dreamer university, or enter bad relations. At that
time
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they told us about our dreams and short stories to not give up. I remember when I was in the 3rd preparatory grade I had exams and in the Arabic test I had forgotten two questions so
I
of me or myself
my
crying for many times till I back home. It was a bad day but my parents told me that I can do best in the nest exams and I'm a very clever student and I can
bath
come out better in a competition, race, or conflict
beat
it easily. For
this
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reason, I thought that the things that we need and the medicine for our wounds.
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, everyone can support
us but
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us, but
still, our parents knew how to touch our hearts. Many think that when they live without their
parents they get
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parents as they get
more experience and become independent. Already
this
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happens but
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happened, but
happened but
with little because other adults do many crimes and mistakes.
For example
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, lots of those adults had a bad friend who impels them to smoke and by the
time
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they become addicted.
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, some died and others go to steal to continue in
this
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way. The negative effects of
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reflect on girls in the same
way but
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way, but
sometimes the girls who did not do that studying hard and if they got a bad score they try to suicide.
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, living without our families
affect
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affects
negatively on many adults either become addicted or died. To conclude, living without our parents as everything has its advantages and disadvantages but its disadvantages are breakneck. So I thought to live with our parents helped us in our
life
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and relations because they support,
advise
a proposal for an appropriate course of action
advice
, and safe
us
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
use
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