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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Revolution in Nuclear
Technology
 has brought several benefits. Possession of Nuclear Weapons
have created
Suggestion
has created
 fear between
countries leaving
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countries, leaving
 conflicts unresolved,
moreover
 nuclear power is turned out to serve
energy need
Suggestion
the energy need
an energy need
energy needs
 economically and in
environmental friendly way
Suggestion
an environmentally friendly way
environmentally friendly way
.
However
, drawbacks
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connects a noun with the preceding word
of
 nuclear
technology
 can not be overseen which are hazardous disasters if it is misused. In my opinion, even though nuclear
technology
 has brought plenty of
advantages but
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advantages, but
 cons of its usage holds more
weightage
. On the one hand,
invention
Suggestion
the invention
 of nuclear
technology
 has blessed mankind by providing affordable energy.
Consequently
, it helps to meet their power demand and foster the development of economy.
Additionally
, development of nuclear weapons has created threat between
first
world
 countries from each other and forcing them to resolve their conflicts by debate.
As a result
, there is little of no worry about arising situations like
world war
Suggestion
a world war
world wars
.
Hence
, it is palpable that nuclear energy has
capability
Suggestion
the capability
 to flourish economy and make a
world
 a better place to live. On the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 hand, It is not wise to gloss over the perilous effects of nuclear disasters. Nowadays, terrorism is increasing at
alarming rate
Suggestion
an alarming rate
alarming rates
 and use of nuclear weapons by
such
 anti
humanitarian
Suggestion
human
 activity could be fatal.
Moreover
,
such
 disasters could even occur in the process of generating nuclear power and testing nuclear weapons and
effect
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affect
 society severally leading to deformities in many generations.
For example
,
historical attack
Suggestion
a historical attack
the historical attack
 on Japan in
World
 war II by nuclear missile had its effects for several decades.
Therefore
, nuclear
technology
 has several negative repercussions on society.
Finally
,
although
 development of nuclear
technology
 has brought several benefits
for
Suggestion
to
mankind but
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mankind, but
 it
can not
can not
cannot
 be accepted unless it becomes completely safe for mankind. It cannot be accepted as
beneficial
Suggestion
a beneficial technology
technology
 until there are some activists around the
world
 who gravitate towards its use to create terror in the
world
. In conclusion, I believe from points above that
disadvantages
Suggestion
disadvantage
 arising from misuse of nuclear
technology
 as well as
horrendous tragedy
Suggestion
a horrendous tragedy
 from nuclear disaster can overshadow all possible benefits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Mutually assured destruction
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Cost-effective
  • Radiation therapy
  • Proliferation
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