In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

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Most developed nations have enacted laws that would serve as a guide to citizens most importantly the young ones. The adolescents are restricted legally to move outside their abodes without a physical
presence
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of a grown person after a specific time at dusk in a few places in the US. I support that a mature person should be made to accompany minors if there is a need to embark on any journey at
sunset in
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sunset, in
those regions of US where there is a ban on movement. The reasons for my stand will be discussed below. A grown-up should endeavour to move with teens in those places in the US where legal restrictions are made in wandering about when it is dark because of the safety of
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teenagers with adults’
presence
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. Barriers to movement
is forced
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forces
in certain countries
as a result
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of the dangers or hazards which had occurred at certain hours of the day, most importantly
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in the dark. The young are prone to encountering these dangers if not properly monitored and guided by the elders.
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, a fifteen-year-old would have been kidnapped and probably assassinated on Saturday night on his way from a club at about 2am if not because of the
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of his Uncle who met him at the club and decided to take him home as a group of bandits hid in a nearby bush on his way home and their efforts to a track him was made futile by the intervention of his Uncle. Another reason why an adult’s
presence
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is paramount if a juvenile intends going out at night where
curfew
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a curfew
is in place in some areas of the US is that the physical representation of
the old
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older
people gives the young people the caution of not
been
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being
involved in violent activities. The adolescent age is a very delicate stage in the life of every human being,
and and
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and
young people tend to engage in criminal acts when everywhere is dark, and not properly monitored. Fro example, a report revealed by the United States of America Security Agency
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year
states
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that there was no record of criminal activities in Dallas during the month of December because parents were with their children everywhere they went according to the directives of the government. In conclusion
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I maintain that a grown person should go along with teenagers when going out at a particular time after nightfall in certain regions of US where hindrances to
movement
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the movement
have been implemented because of the safety of the minors and to curtail likely violence.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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