manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • suggest a suitable date and time for the party • recommend a venue • propose the food and entertainment options that should be available.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter regarding some important information about the farewell which we are arranging for Mr. John. As we have discussed we will arrange it within
this
week and I would like to add some suggestions, which I have got from
few
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other employees. In order to make it convenient for everyone, it will be better to arrange the party on Friday evening. It’s been 2 days
,
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since I am trying to arrange everything .So, I have come up with the idea to have it arranged at The Floral Restaurant, which is nearest to our office.
Although
the price is
little
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high , other colleagues are contributing towards it.
Additionally
,
This
restaurant is famous for
it’s
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food and expert chefs, specialised in Punjabi food and it will
worth
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every cent. Knowing the fact that the restaurant is busy on Fridays ,we can easily book a separate hall where singers sing different Indian music. I hope you will consider these options . Thank you for giving me the opportunity to arrange everything . I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Sumanpreet Kaur.
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Grammar and Punctuation
Make sure to proofread your letter for minor grammatical errors and punctuation. For example, 'it’s food' should be 'its food' and 'it will worth every cent' should be 'it will be worth every cent.'
Sentence Structure
Consider breaking down longer sentences into shorter ones for better readability. For instance, 'In order to make it convenient for everyone, it will be better to arrange the party on Friday evening' could be simpler and more direct.
Task Response
The letter addresses all parts of the task effectively, suggesting a date, time, venue, and entertainment options.
Tone
The tone of the letter is appropriate for the context and remains polite and respectful throughout.
Structure
The letter follows a logical structure, beginning with the introduction, followed by details, and concluding with a request for consideration.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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