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EVERY YEAR SEVERAL LANGUAGES DIE OUT.SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THIS IS NOT IMPORTANT BECAUSE LIFE BE EASIER IF THERE ARE FEWER LANGUAGES IN THE WORLD.

#year #languages #people #life #world
Language
 has always been
means
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meant
 to communicate. There are different types of languages
such
 as sign
language
 for those who are vocally challenged. Languages has been
into
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in
 existence since human being exist on Earth, even God’s need
language
 to communicate. As humans evolved, many new languages
was developed
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were developed
 in the past 100 years. As the year passed many languages faded away, some people think it’s good to have fewer languages helps in better communication. I will discuss both sides of the arguments and conclude my view in the following paragraph.
Initially
, before the time, languages
is
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are
 a part of the civilization and
culture
 of some tribes or community. Even in modern era few tribes are trying hard to keep their dying
culture
 alive and
language
 is
major contributor
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the major contributor
a major contributor
. As the young people migrate to the urban
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
, adopt to the new common languages. There are many
old
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older
 languages
such
 as Sanskrit and ancient Tamil, which is not in practice, these are ancient languages represent the 1000 years old
culture
 in India.
For instance
,
few years
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a few years
back many
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back, many
 coffins with mummies were discovered inside the pyramid, on the coffins there were pictures,
archeologist
an anthropologist who studies prehistoric people and their culture
archaeologists
 are still unable to figure it out the picture languages.
Furthermore
, in today’s world land is divided based on the languages
such
 as Hindi in India, Turkish in Turkey and Arabic in the middle east.
Moreover
, English is the official
language
 used around the globe, adapt to the common languages makes it easier to communicate,
parallel we
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parallel, we
 should make sure that old languages should not fade away, extinction of a
language
 is directly related to
culture
 and vice versa. One better way to protect the dying
language
 is to frequent practice and keep a data
of
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on
in
 the same for references. In conclusion, we are what we are because of our ancestor’s, saving their languages and
culture
 is a sign of respect. So, we should find a method, yet effective way to pass on to our
next
 generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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