Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. 🔸To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is being propounded by some that metropolitans’ traffic jams and limited housing resources can be mitigated through huge factories and
consequently
their employees’ relocation to the suburbs. However
, I opine that repositioning process can impose extravagant costs and regulation complexities and the population distribution will not be effected necessarily.
First
of all the solution must be resource-wise efficient
, Accept comma addition
wise, efficient
optimum
and practical which the proposed one is not the case. As a matter of fact, rebuilding a company will demand significant financial resources and assets. Suggestion
optimal
For instance
, finding a proper site and installing supporting
infrastructure Accept comma addition
installing, supporting
such
transportation system and distribution partners, are not always available and affordable options for owners of the business. As results, in a tradeoff
view, the huge implied cost Suggestion
trade off
make
the whole plan financially unappealing. Suggestion
makes
Moreover
, the companies are mostly possessed by private sector
and the governmental authorizes will face serious complexities in implementing a legislation to encourage or even force them to commence the relocation process.
Suggestion
the private sector
Second
of all, distance from work-place
does not induce enough motivation for employees to move out of the city and migrate to the suburb. In fact, individuals’ place of living is an important a place where work is done
workplace
parts
of their long term plans and lifestyle, especially when they are married. Suggestion
part
Thus
, they rather to spend a few more hours on their way to work, instead
of altering their lifestyle. For instance
the families with children do have concerns about education system quality
that will make them Suggestion
quality education system
to
reluctant to move to to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
country side
. As results, the population distribution of the city may not receive a serious impact, indeed its traffic and housing capacity.
To conclude, I have found the idea of relocating companies to the countryside an expensive and Suggestion
the countryside
countryside
unaffordable
option for governments and business owners, that you have the financial means for
affordable
hence
, It will not be any guarantee that population map will be affect
in a way that resolve metropolitans main issues.Suggestion
affected
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