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It is easy to take a photo with an automatic photo booth. Do you agree with this statement?

The given flow chart illustrates an automatic
photo
Use synonyms
 booth.
Ovarall
Suggestion
Overall
, there are 2 areas. The outside
area
Use synonyms
 have button to choose the kind of photos and the inside
area
Use synonyms
 which take a
photo
Use synonyms
. As clearly seen that the remove board is
main thing
Suggestion
the main thing
 of outside
area
Use synonyms
, which conclude
coin
airtight sealed metal container for food or drink or paint etc.
can
 hold, button to choose size, and contact to choose
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 of photos. At
first
Linking Words
, coins will be put on the hold on top.
Next
Linking Words
,
button
Suggestion
the button
a button
 which under hold coin was put to choose the size 1 large format or 4 passport-size photos. Under that
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 or
black white
Accept comma addition
black, white
 which passport photos should be colour will be chosen by the contact. At the top is
an
Suggestion
a
 sample board about size,
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 help for choosing
photo
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 easier.
Next
Linking Words
, the curtain is created like a door to
divided
Suggestion
divide
 2 areas. Adjustable stool lay in the middle of the room that helps create well when taking photos. Opposite that, automatic
photo
Use synonyms
 machine
include
Suggestion
includes
mirror
Suggestion
a mirror
 on the top.
Next
Linking Words
 the light which signal flash after 3 seconds is under
mirror
Suggestion
the mirror
. The eye level
area
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look
Suggestion
looks
 at that when taking photos. One thing to note that the door
certain
Suggestion
certainly
 must be closed when taking photos because the light will show around
room
Suggestion
the room
. After 60 seconds, taking photos in
photo
Use synonyms
 delivered which beside the remove board.

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