Some schools prefer to teach specialized subjects to students after the age of 15, while others suggest that all the subjects should be taught throughout school life. What are the benefits of these 2 approaches? Which one is better, in your opinion?

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Nowadays, there are 2 different approaches to studying
school
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-student, according to the
first
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one, specialized subjects should be taught to the student who are already 15 years old, the
second
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is about necessarily of studying all subjects for the whole
school
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period. The two approaches come with a set of advantages for
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-learners. In the
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paragraph I am going to
shade
get rid of
shed
a light on the upsides of the former type of education and in the
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one
on
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of
the benefits of teaching students all subjects over the
school
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life. The approach to divide
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subjects on those that should be learned before and after
exact age
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the exact age
of students is beneficial due to the changing ability of student to understand information in different periods of their life.
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, some specialized subjects require special knowledges and skills, that children might still not obtain because of the lack of experience and theoretical knowledges that are supposed to be learned only
in
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at
the age of 13.
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, teaching a 10-year-old to understand the basics of economics can be too
unsurmountable
not capable of being surmounted or overcome
insurmountable
for his brain, because at that time he still doesn’t fully understand the basics of mathematics. In terms of another approach, when
school
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administration stands for teaching students ordinary subjects together with specialized ones, the main advantage is that it provides
schoolers
a learned person (especially in the humanities); someone who by long study has gained mastery in one or more disciplines
scholars
with
opportunity
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an opportunity
the opportunity
opportunities
to broaden their mind in different directions, by pursuing additional information. It gives them a head start over the other students that have started to learn these subjects only from the age of 15. To conclude,
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both these approaches have its good sides. I consider teaching students all the subjects throughout
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life as a right step in the development of today’s educational process. As soon as students embark on understanding diverse spheres of science, they will have a bigger chance to realize their educational aspirations.
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