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Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? What is your opinion on that?

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It is considered that most of the high-level jobs are being performed by men. In my opinion, I think some of these jobs should be kept for women. It is true that many men are involved in the day to day provision of income in other to take care of the
family
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family, such
such
 as the provision of money for cooking, wears, and other necessary household necessities. All these needs can only be met if they engage in high-level
jobs thereby
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jobs, thereby
 fulfilling the demands of their family and friends. Occupations
such
 as medicine, engineering, banking are high-level jobs and they require extra skills and adequate care, so men are always needed in these fields to perform
such
 jobs, but women should not be left out.
However
, occupations
such
 as nursing and
medicine which
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medicine, which
 are considered as jobs at a higher level can
also
 be done by women.
Although
 these jobs are stressful, the government still requires the services of women because it
also
 deals with the care of individuals which women
can do perform
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can do to perform
 well.
In addition
, most women are seen as the breadwinners of their families. If they engage in high-level jobs, they would be able to cater to their household, thereby creating better opportunities for their loved ones. In conclusion, I believe that the government should engage both men and women in high-level jobs.
This
 will ensure a better development of the society and it will
also
 encourage women to work harder to earn a living.
Furthermore
, I would recommend that the government should make provision where men and women can work collaboratively,
this
 will enable women to acquire more skills needed in their workplace.
Submitted by EKWESIANYA Emmaculate Ogechi on

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