Some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning skills. Do you agree or disagree.

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To be

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professional, a

person

have

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has

to study more or less sixteen years; including primary, high school and university.

However

focus

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the focus

of the education is questioned by the way to teach because time is not

divided according the

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divided according to the

needs of the world of work. In my opinion, the time

is been spending

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is spent

is spending

to learn

fact

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facts

a fact

and no skills. Currently,

objectives

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the objectives

of the education is

teach

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taught

teaching

different subjects. Usually, the subjects are

teaching

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taught

inside

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a classroom during many hours per day.

For example

, all schools and universities teach mathematic, physic, geographic and history may be two or three times weekly.

Nevertheless

, they do not know about crops, financial plan, economic, politics actual, metal works,

wood works

work made of wood; especially moldings or stairways or furniture

woodworks

and gardens because they only learn fact about that. But, they really do not have practical knowledge regarding

being one more than one

two

important abilities to

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develop

developing

their work activities.

On the other hand

, many countries have been changing the ways of teaching with the goal of

improve

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improving

improved

skill students. Colleges and universities have included new subjects in their study plan. Mainly, practical subject which student have to practice in external companies, laboratories or new business.

For instance

, Education Department of Brazil created agreements with government offices and private companies, where the students could

development

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develop

skills and gain experience in their professions.

As a result

califications average

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qualifications, average

qualifications average

increased in a twenty percent.

Also

, when students finished their study, they got a job faster, because of experience and practical knowledge that they show in their curriculum vitae. In conclusion, it is evident that colleges and universities spend a lot of time teaching

fact

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facts

However

world

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the world

changed faster every day.

Therefore

education statement

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an education statement

should do the same and think seriously about skill and needs of the

futures

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future

student regarding actual world.

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rote memorization
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real-life challenges
technological advancements
information management
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lifelong learning
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