Some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning skills. Do you agree or disagree.
To be
professional a
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professional, a
have
to study more or less sixteen years; including primary, high school and university. Suggestion
has
However
, focus
of the education is questioned by the way to teach because time is not Suggestion
the focus
divided according the
needs of the world of work. In my opinion, the time Suggestion
divided according to the
is been spending
to learn Suggestion
is spent
is spending
fact
and no skills.
Currently, Suggestion
facts
a fact
objectives
of the education is Suggestion
the objectives
teach
different subjects. Usually, the subjects are Suggestion
taught
teaching
teaching
Suggestion
taught
inside
a classroom during many hours per day. Suggestion
in
For example
, all schools and universities teach mathematic, physic, geographic and history may be two or three times weekly. Nevertheless
, they do not know about crops, financial plan, economic, politics actual, metal works, wood works
and gardens because they only learn fact about that. But, they really do not have practical knowledge regarding work made of wood; especially moldings or stairways or furniture
woodworks
to
important abilities to being one more than one
two
development
their work activities.
Suggestion
develop
developing
On the other hand
, many countries have been changing the ways of teaching with the goal of improve
skill students. Colleges and universities have included new subjects in their study plan. Mainly, practical subject which student have to practice in external companies, laboratories or new business. Suggestion
improving
improved
For instance
, Education Department of Brazil created agreements with government offices and private companies, where the students could development
skills and gain experience in their professions. Suggestion
develop
As a result
, califications average
increased in a twenty percent. Accept comma addition
qualifications, average
qualifications average
Also
, when students finished their study, they got a job faster, because of experience and practical knowledge that they show in their curriculum vitae.
In conclusion, it is evident that colleges and universities spend a lot of time teaching fact
. Suggestion
facts
However
, world
changed faster every day. Suggestion
the world
Therefore
, education statement
should do the same and think seriously about skill and needs of the Suggestion
an education statement
futures
student regarding actual world.Suggestion
future
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