Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Countries
has started
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have started
to be seen almost same
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as people can reach same products no matter where they are
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I completely evaluate
this
situation as negative
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since I think that
although
ıt may affect positively both economy and people
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,
it
damage
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damages
the culture of nations'. On the one hand
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İt is true that with the help of internet countless items become visibly achievable
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Because the number of online shopping website which allows people over the world to attain all the products
such
as books, games
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clothes or electronic devices has
rised
located or moved above the surround or above the normal position
raised
risen
nowadays.
As a result
, countries
starts
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start
to look like each other as people follow often same trends.
For example
, identical fashion flows can be seen in everywhere in the world
such
as wearing jeans or
t-shirts
a garment worn on the upper half of the body
shirts
.
This
case may increase the consumption and
therefore
affect the economies of countries.
Furthermore
,
accesibilty
the quality of being at hand when needed
accessibility
of different product gives people more options while purchasing something and
therefore
people can get the things that they need cheaper and better quality.
On the other hand
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some people claim that using the same products may destroy the culture
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I completely agree with those people due to the fact that following the same trends may cause people to lose their consciousness.
For example
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after the globalization of Zara
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a clothes brand in
Australia which
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Australia, which
produce racy dress, women from
muslim
of or relating to or supporting Islamism
Muslim
countries have been found to change their
apperance thogh
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appearance, though
apperance though
appearance though
appearance thogh
appearances thogh
those
type
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types
of clothes were not appropriate according to their ethnicity and belief
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In
conlusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
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even if being able to buy same products is useful in terms of economy and people
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drawbacks
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the drawbacks
of
this
situation overweigh the benefits
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because it may lead to extinction of cultures as long as people act without thinking while they are purchasing something they need.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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