Many university students live with their families,while other live away from their home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations ?

University
education is a stepping stone of
successful career
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a successful career
successful careers
. A significant number of students live with families while studying at
university
,
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,
whilst others stay on rent at various places near the
university
.
This
essay will highlight both merits and demerits with elaboration.
Firstly
,
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,
those who live with families during the period of
time
in
university
education have
comfortable life
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a comfortable life
since
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from
their parents usually have rich enough to pay for all expenses. Not only annual fee, but
also
other sorts of bill as well, leading to having sufficient
time
to utilize on study for pupils.
Besides
this
, students can conveniently borrow books from the library and return them as they have a fair amount of
time
to learn it.
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on the negative side, a survey conducted by Singapore
university
revealed that 76% of students live with their families during the
time
of studying in
university
they find difficulties afterwards when they move for work purpose in another state. One the flip side, as these days students are being enrolled for different courses in a
university
due to which they have to pay for tremendous expenditure ranging from bill, taxes, rent and many more. For which
,
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,
many students do part-
time
job to meet their ends, due to which sometimes students acquire supply in a subject and reason of low grade as well
.
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.
However
, living
isolate
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isolated
has own benefits, it makes students independent and self
reliance
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reliant
they
also teaches
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also teach
how to sort out problems on their own as well as they easily interact with others. In conclusion,
although
students who reside with their parents have numerous advantages, in future they will face difficulties to live far away. While pupils who accommodating on rent might face difficulties to survive, they will become independent
for
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of
from
the rest of the life.
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