some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the span of
life
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, everybody has a phase in the
life
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where they are unable to find the ray of the sunshine. In
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situations, some people opine that, it is good to accept the bad situations, while others believe that, a person should find and try the ways to come out of an unfavourable situation. I agree with the latter notion and hard work is the best solution in
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kind of conditions. On one hand,
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with, If a person is fighting against an unfavourable situation
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as not feel satisfaction with the job or financial problems,
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of all, he should think about the ways to
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comeout
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come out
from the problem rather than try to be satisfied with what he have.
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, try to apply
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solutions in the real
life
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. May be
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it at a slow pace, but gradually situations will turn to fruitful in the long run.
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, solved problem after the struggle adds not only the confidence along with experience but
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gives the courage to
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comeout
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come out
from any bad circumstances in
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.
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to that, it is the way to climb a ladder in
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.
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,
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, one school of thought believes that, feeling contentment is a good way to
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come out
from
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conditions. There are many disadvantages to be ideal in situations.
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and foremost, everyday looks tough and down one's confidence.
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, the victim may have to suffer through breakage of the family relations.
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, It all leads to the endless tension and become a sufferer of the severe chronic diseases like the depression and migraine. Ultimately, it worsens the
life
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. For an example, if you create a fear to the exam,
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you will fail, but if you take measures to improve your score, definitely, you will pass the exam. To summarize, Feel contentment in unfavourable condition is a good solution while hard work towards betterment is the best solution to
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comeout
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come out
of any situation because it will provide all-round growth.
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, I completely agree with the process to find the possible ways.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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