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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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People have different views about whether it is more effective for students to
study
 alone or in a
group
. While it is useful for students to do something alone, I believe that
group
study
 is better. On the one hand, there are undeniable benefits of studying alone.
Firstlyfirstly
, students can avoid getting carried away from the outside environment which can interfere with whatever they are focusing on.
For example
, when students
study
 together with their friends, they might be tempted to easily have a
chitchat
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chit chat
insteadchat
 about the
rumors
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumours
, films or idols,...
instead
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Instead
 of learning, especially those who have much in common.
Secondly
, their independent ability to work independently
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Canis
canoes
cans
 increased. Students will be more
activeraise
 the sense of initiative into
brainstormingbrainstorm
 to complete their tasks on their own.
Thirdly
, self-learning is considered as a way to practice their will.,
tThey
people in general
they
this
 will become more persevere and self-
confidentbelieve
 in themselves that they can deal with those problems they are facing.
On the other hand
, it is perhaps even more fundamental for students
to
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studying
study
 in a
group
.
wWhen
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When
WWhen
 they take part in
athe
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a the
group
 discussion, they have the chance to discuss with partners about
theirwhatever
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their whatever
study
 problems and have them sorted
outsort
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out sort
 it out. Studying with their friends helps learners become
morenot
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more not
 feel less motivated.,
Tthey
people in general
they
 will be more interested in the lessons and have a better understanding of it.
raise
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Raise
 everyone’s responsibility for common issues. Students can learn other skills from their partners like
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 problems, observing, knowing
more effective
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most effective
 learning methods, these
thingsall
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things all
 of which are necessary for real life
.
Accept space
.
 And they can realize their strengths and weaknesses as well as how to work on
themweakness
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them weakness
. In conclusion, both two methods have advantages and are used for different purposes.
However
,
Accept space
,
But it seems to me that, studying in a
group
 is more desirable in the studying process
Submitted by Dịu Lê on

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