You are working for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: • describe why you want to take the course • explaining how it will be beneficial to company • tell who will be managing your work in your absence.
Dear John,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about one of the project management professional training course advertisement
seen online by Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
institute
named Simplilearn. As I am from Add an article
an institute
projects
background, so I found it to be Correct article usage
a projects
value adding
to my current position and Add a hyphen
value-adding
also
it gives high revenue to the company.
Let me explain you
in detail, the domain I am talking about is allowing the organization to cut off on extra time and resources used and helps in saving costs. There are several technical aspects and methodologies like Kanban and Six Sigma that teaches how to keep employees motivated and engaged in the project. Change preposition
to you
Moreover
, it guides how to retain project
without monetary loss. Though the professional course requires 32 hours of classes in a month, it can be managed Fix the agreement mistake
projects
in
weekends as well.
Change preposition
at
Therefore
, I will be taking these classes on saturday
and Change the capitalization
Saturday
sunday
for a month, so that the work doesn’t get hampered on weekdays. Change the capitalization
Sunday
Also
, the workload is less on Saturdays. The mandate
work will be allocated to my subordinates, but iI will keep myself available on call in case of urgency. Change the verb form
mandated
It
would be gratefulCorrect pronoun usage
I
,
if you allow me to go for it. At the same time, I request you to please provide funding from the company as it will be Remove the comma
apply
assets
to them.
Hopefully, you will pay immediate attention to it.
Best Regards,
UrvashiFix the agreement mistake
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite