In some centuries, the government pays unemployed people on the weekly basis. How this would impact people as well as government? Do you agree or disagree with that

In some countries, the
state
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provides the dole on
weekly basis
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a weekly basis
to those persons who lost their job, and I agree with
this
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policy, it is beneficial
for
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to
both people and government at the same time, as it
fulfills
put in effect
fulfils
the financial need of the people, and for the government point of view, it helps to decrease the
crime
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rate
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in the
country
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. On the one hand, due to the funds provided by the
state
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the
rate
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of suicide automatically decreases, as people do not have to worry about their bread and butter
any more
at the present or from now on; usually used with a negative
anymore
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furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, they can still education to their children despite losing their jobs, which is a very important aspect, with the help of
authorities funding
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authorities, funding
authority's funding
authority's authority's funding
they can achieve their dream and provide education
to
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for
their kids.
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, the dole
also
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helps to decrease the
rate
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of domestic violence, as the
person
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person's
mind is relaxed and calm.
on the other hand
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, the payment is given by the
state
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to jobless people resulting in the decrease of
crime
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rate
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in the
country
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,
for example
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, if the unemployment
rate
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increases in the
country
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it directly impact the
rate
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of
crime
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, due to lack of job opportunities people starts to break laws as they have no other option to provide food to their family, by receiving government funding the ratio of
crime
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decline.
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, it
also
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helps to maintain good relations between the
state
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and the people, as people start respecting the rules and regulations, policies of the
state
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, law and orders of the
country
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, which
also
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results in the growth of the
country
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.
in
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In
conclusion, the dole is beneficial for both the
state
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and the people, as it helps to reduce persons problems as well as take part in the growth of the
country
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.

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