Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy products. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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day and age, it is undeniable that advertising plays a pivotal role in promoting products and induce people to purchase them.

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, there exists the masses who show

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the difference

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essay would make an attempt to shed some light on both

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before drawing my own reasoned conclusion. Undoubtedly, people’s shopping habit could be mainly influenced by the advertisements. Why do I reckon

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idea? Advertisements not only provide customers with the features and

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functions, but

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give the data about the rate of use and quality of the products which help people identify the pros and cons before purchasing while the products without being advertised could be less noticed. In fact, commercials are now so prevailing and diverse amongst the daily life.

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, industries always find and create innovative content of advertising to not let their customers feel bored with the old ones.

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,

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the industry

requires creative employees in which costs company more money to invest.

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, the more products they sale, the more profit they earn which

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afford that financial problems. But why some people still report commercials to be annoying and so common? The

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factor is that a variety of advertisements give the wrong information of the products or even exaggerate the quality of the items.

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, people who have been mistaken may lose the trust in other advertisements and

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statement may spread to other people.

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, advertisements are so plentiful that sometimes they annoy viewers. In many platforms of social media, some commercials appear to be

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broken

-ads which really disturb the internet users.

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, overall,

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the losing of potential customers and the decrease in

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the number

of sellers of productions. In conclusion, I believe that

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a public promotion of some product or service

advertising

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effective

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strategy, but

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productions should consider the side effect of

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exploitation to the point of diminishing returns

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and the money invested in the projects.