Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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the internet

is gaining more and more popularity nowadays. While some people believe that

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shopping is extremely advantageous

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others might argue that it has its fare share of drawbacks. In

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will discuss both and present my support on the former view. As

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the internet

is growing rapidly, all the customers are being diverted towards shopping online which is creating a big problem for the people who own physical stores.

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is because

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the internet

allows customers to shop from the comfort of their couch.

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, Amazon has become the most famous online store in the

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decade due to the convenience and comfort it provides to its customers.

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, if customers would still buy from stationary shops, they would lose more of their precious time and

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, will not have time for more important things.

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, I believe that online shopping has made our lives much easier. Now we have more opportunities than ever before for online stores are much quicker to set up and require only a minimal investment.

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, drop shipping is gaining huge popularity these days as everyone who could not afford to open a physical store before, now have the opportunity to do it. In conclusion, even though shopping from the

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has its drawbacks like creating a threat for the store owners,

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personally believe that the advantages of online shopping outweighs its disadvantages.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

244 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

convenience
time-saving
wide selection
competitive prices
discounts
accessibility
global marketplace
availability
fraud
scams
lack of
physical interaction
personal experience
impersonal
customer service
delays
delivery
return process

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

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