In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

The expression “hard work leads to success” is very common saying in few cultures. Teaching youngsters that persistence is the key to success is a general practice in typical community around the world.

However

,

this

messege

a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled

message

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has

it’s

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

merits as it encourages and motivates,

on the other hand

it has

demrits

a mark against a person for misconduct or failure; usually given in school or armed forces

demerits

also

. We will discuss both the sides of the arguments in the following.

Initially

, the elders have been passing on

this

messege

a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled

message

messages

from

past hundred years

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the past hundred years

, the reason behind

this

is to guide and motivate the juveniles.

Indeed persuance

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Indeed, persons

Indeed persons

and hard work will bring some success. Quite often

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

get

demotivated

and give up on something they have worked hard. They are energetic,

ehthusiastic

having or showing great excitement and interest

enthusiastic

and always eager to learn, they have dreams to achieve. So proper guidance is needed. For

instace

an occurrence of something

instance

, winning the running race or quiz competition is a long term commitment and very easy to get diverted from the focus.

Therefore coachs

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Therefore, coaches

Therefore coaches

keep on encouraging, so that they stay focused.

Furthermore

, despite of benefits are there is always

negetive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

effects. At the young age, children are very sensitive and take any issue seriously. To reach

to

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for

their

goals their

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goals, their

focus gets

narowed

reduced in size as by squeezing together

narrowed

and

thus

, results in ignoring

rest

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the rest

of the activities of normal life. To demonstrate, if a student cannot score top rank in the written exams or not able to get

medal

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medals

in sports eventually leads to discouragement and isolate themselves. To conclude, though there are benefits to the teachings that working hard

yeilds

be the cause or source of

yields

success.

However

,

consequences

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the consequences

cannot be left

unadressed

not addressed

unaddressed

.