The advantages and disadvantages of studying online

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global assessment of the impact of the corona virus, everything from economics to daily life has been seriously affected, especially the children’s study as their parents are concerned. To make amends for

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, the Department of Education and Training has required many schools in some particular areas to teach online. While many students use

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as a beneficial aid in learning

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others think that it is not as effective as classroom teaching.

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essay below will discuss the merits and demerits of distance learning. It is undoubtedly true that distance learning is beneficial in several ways

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, you can’t deny that

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idea can help you save time and energy since you don’t have to commute.

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, if you learn online, you only have to prepare several essential items and open your laptop or phone, etc.,…,

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learn like you always do in class.

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, it is common knowledge that online lectures can be recorded;

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, you can just replay it whenever or wherever you want to.

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helps a lot if you have struggled with comprehending a lesson and are too shy to ask your teacher.

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, while you are doing housework, you could just open the record on your phone and listen.

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have some drawbacks. To learn productively, children need effective self-motivation which may bring trouble to some inactive pupils who try to ignore the study, because when we learn like that, teachers hardly can control the class and they will have a chance to play truant without getting caught. Another disadvantage of

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is that there will be no laboratory experiments since students don’t have enough facilities and experiences to do things on their own at home.

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, unless each child has their supervisor by side, damage can be caused easily since the teacher could not pay enough attention to everyone In the nutshell, it can be concluded that the advantages of distance learning outweigh any disadvantages it has. In my opinion, online learning is helpful if the user knows how to utilize it.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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351 words

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fluency
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cognitive skills
cultural awareness
opportunities
globalized world
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linguistic abilities
cultural exchange
language proficiency
language barrier
foreign travel
personal growth
academic achievement
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The advantages and disadvantages of studying online

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sports, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinio

in spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry problems and solutions

It is generally believed that some people are born with certains talents, for instance for sport or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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