Your landlord has increased the amount of rent you pay every month and you don’t find it appropriate. Write a letter to the landlord and in your letter, • Explain why you are writing • Describe why you find the increase inappropriate • What you want to do now .

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Dear Sharma Ji I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction

about

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the increment of my house rent every month which is completely irrelevant. As you know, I have been living there

from

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last

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3 years and always paid my rent as well as electricity bill before time,

Moreover

, I used to keep the house neat and clean like my personal place.

On the other hand

, all other owners accelerate the amount annually with suitable conditions,

however

this

kind of monthly incline is definitely inappropriate for me. To be very honest, I am unable to afford

such

high

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price.

Consequently

, I would like to request you to increase the amount of rent at a reasonable rate annually

instead

of monthly.

In contrast

, if you could not do

this

favor

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for me

then

I would not be able to live in your home anymore, Apart from

this

, please refund my security too. Waiting for your prompt service. Yours Sincerely, Bhawna

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