Annual average spending on clothes per person in the US in 1985, 1995 and 2005.

The given chart shows the amount of
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spent on clothes per person in the US over 3 years Overall, it is clear that there was an upward trend in average spending on clothes yearly in all 4 groups. Remarkably, only in women’s clothes did the figure for clothes’ revenue reach the highest point throughout the whole period. As can be seen from the chart, there was a slight increase in the sales of boys’ clothes and girl’s clothes. In 1985, the payment on boys’ clothes as much as that on girls’ clothes, approximately about 100 dollars per person. 2 years later, in 1995 and 2005,
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spend on boy’s clothes remain stable.
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, customers spending on Girls’ clothes witnessed a slight climb to 150 dollars. There was a significant climb in the revenues of Men's clothing and women’s clothes. In the
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year of periods, the amount of
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spent on men’s clothing was above 300 dollars, while that on women’s clothing was nearly 500.
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the figure for
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spent on men’s clothes reached the peak of 450 dollars, but later dropped to 400 dollars.
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, a growth was seen in the sales of women’s clothes throughout the period, notably, only in 2005 did the revenue of women’s clothes reach the highest point of 650 dollars.

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