It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the question of whether or not providing university places for students is impossible and useless has been receiving a great deal of public attention.
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these opinions have many disagreements, I completely agree with these ideas. There are a variety of reasons why providing tertiary
education
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for almost all young students is impossible.
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,
since
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the sustainable development of a nation requires to have many investments in many key areas,
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as healthcare, economy,
education
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, supporting to build campuses may put more burden on national budgets. In fact, building more places for tertiary
education
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is prohibitive, not to mention the cost
for
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of
buying indispensable teaching equipment, which implies that providing higher
education
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for the majority of youngsters is a difficulty for the government.
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, by letting children enter higher
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, parents have to pay a large amount of money for tuition fees.
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means that
meager
deficient in amount or quality or extent
meagre
measures
income families will struggle with a guarantee to have enough money for
basic demand
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the basic demand
of living and their children's fees of schooling, cannot improve their standard of living
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.
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, having a university degree no longer has a vital role in the future of young people.
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, in order to be able to make a living as soon as possible, many school-leavers opt for vocational courses which help young people can earn money without committing four years of college.
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means that learners are armed with practical skills and work experience, which helps them have better job opportunities and have a better future.
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, if the majority of youngsters pursue higher
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, there will be an imbalance in
labour market
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the labour market
. In fact, many prosperous countries,
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as Canada and Japan have continuously imported foreign workers to fill the
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whole
of manual
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
in their country, implying that vocational courses should not be marginalized. In conclusion,
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having access to tertiary
education
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is important, it is impossible and useless at present. By considering all the pros and cons, the government and young people will make the best decision.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • limited resources
  • quality of education
  • strained resources
  • job market
  • underemployment
  • competition for skilled jobs
  • vocational training
  • apprenticeships
  • economic constraints
  • public budgets
  • inefficiencies
  • devalue
  • significance
  • perceived quality
  • universal access
  • diversity in skills
  • balanced society
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