In many countries, an increase in crime has been blamed on violent images on TV and computer and video games. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many counties nowadays face serious problem increasing the
crime
rate among society and dealing with it. While there are many arguments about the reason of the growth Use synonyms
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level, I strongly disagree that misbehaviour TV shows and violent computer games are the root of low breaking.
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of all, violent images do not only feature to contributing to the increase violence level. One of the essential factor is unemployment degree. Owing to lack valuable job skill and performance, some people spent their time on the street and find new a group of jobless street-boys. Linking Words
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condition, in some cases, cause more anti-social actions Linking Words
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as mugging, theft and shoplifting. Linking Words
For instance
, many researchers pointed out that almost 45 per cent of offenders commit an offence to lack of money and available food.
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Secondly
, the economic condition and poverty are the primary cause of violence. The high Linking Words
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rate is usually caused by some other reasons Use synonyms
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as poorness. Linking Words
In addition
, economic and political instability causes to cross social norms line. Linking Words
For example
, in Auganistan, citizens do whatever they want, and burglaries, murders and robberies is being happened every day like usual condition in Linking Words
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country.
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On the other hand
, for many, especially adults, addicted playing dreadful online games and teenagers waste on seeing horrible movies. By Linking Words
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way, gaining more adrenaline rush and feeling more powerful is the reason for the murders and shoplifting. Linking Words
However
, in my perspective, Seeing TV and playing violent games is not main base to Linking Words
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.
To sum up, violent shows on TV and violent video games contribute to a growth Use synonyms
crime
level, but other factors Use synonyms
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as social pressure and political problems are more outweigh.Linking Words
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