Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Countries in advance always

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developing countries by giving

money

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to them.

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,

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is not an effective solution for poverty. Some experts suggest that rich countries ought to give other various kinds of help to

the poor

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poorer

countries rather than the financial

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. In my opinion, I agree that there should be other types of helping

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the financial

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. Reasons that financial

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only does not solve problems efficiently can be studied well to be avoided. Advanced countries usually lend

money

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to developing

countries especially

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countries, especially

which have significant economic crises in order to help them improve fundamental aspects of life.

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, Egypt

burrows

get temporarily

borrows

money

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from other countries to improve educational services and eliminate health issues.

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, none of that has been achieved in the real life. Existence of thieves in the higher positions who spend portions of the

money

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on their personal services can be a considerable factor.

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, the lent

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does not contribute to anything but loans accumulations.

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,

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of the causes is the poor planning. Most of the developed countries do not have economic experts which plan for the utilization of the financial

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, and

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a factor of wasting

money

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on unnecessary projects. Several forms of aiding can be sent to

the poor

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poorer

countries to help them. It is obvious that developing countries need experts to decide the priorities in order to avoid wasting

money

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. Because of that,

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significant type of helping is by offering special students either

partial

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partially

or

fully

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full

-funded scholarships to educate them well in various majors to help their country. As the saying goes, do not give me a fish, but help me how to catch them.

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, to avoid stealing

money

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, advanced countries ought to send

engineers

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engineers, for

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to supervise building the schools or hospitals by themselves, and they must recruit an accountant to spend the

money

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on the right place. In conclusion, it can be seen that if the rich countries helped other ones in various ways, that would be remarkable and more helpful than focusing on

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aspect.

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, when developed countries contribute the development of other ones, they guarantee that those fresh advanced countries will

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them in any crises.