It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It appears that
only person
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the only person
who was born with talent can succeed in fields,
such
as art and sport.
In contrast
,
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,
some people believe that any child can become accomplished and
skillful
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
athletes or artists as long as they have the right guidance and work hard.In
this
essay
,
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,
I will discuss both
point
Suggestion
points
of views before giving my own opinions. People who receive a natural gift to have certain abilities often
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their goals with less difficulties than others.Their talent
make
Suggestion
makes
them excellent in the way they do the things while their passion drives them to a huge success.
For instance
, Lionel Messi is considered as a football genius as
this
sport seemed to come naturally to him. The difference between Messi and other players is that his performance is
such
simplicity like football become a part of him but is almost impossible for anyone to imitate.
On the other hand
,
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,
many support the view that genius are not born
,
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,
but made.From my own experience
,
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,
I did observe and hear about people who are born without being gifted
,
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,
but passion.Their way to success may painful and take a very long time of patience and persistence
.
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.
Cristiano Ronaldo is a football player
,
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,
in contrast
to Messi
,
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,
is called a hard working machine and earn his career with a lot of efforts.
In other words
,
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,
his speed and skills are totally built on his hard training. In conclusion, I believe that people can succeed in any fields with attempt and a suitable learning environment
,
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,
while natural talent help people to
achieeir
a cry or shout of approval
cheer
gove
cause to have, in the abstract sense or physical sense
give
gave
thals
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
thus
tales
sales
easier.
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  • natural talent
  • innate ability
  • genetic predisposition
  • nurture
  • nurturing
  • develop
  • cultivate
  • foster
  • encourage
  • inherit
  • unravel
  • reveal
  • demonstrate
  • evidence
  • proof
  • counterargument
  • counter
  • overcome
  • compensate
  • arguably
  • debate
  • controversial
  • persuasive
  • convincing
  • conclusive
  • critical
  • essential
  • crucial
  • vital
  • significant
  • prominent
  • noteworthy
  • imperative
  • compulsory
  • fundamental
  • compelling
  • persuasive
  • support
  • favor
  • oppose
  • disagree
  • acknowledge
  • consider
  • claim
  • view
  • belief
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