It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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athletes or artists as long as they have the right guidance and work hard.In having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
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People who receive a natural gift to have certain abilities often Suggestion
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fulfill
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For instance
, Lionel Messi is considered as a football genius as this
sport seemed to come naturally to him. The difference between Messi and other players is that his performance is such
simplicity like football become a part of him but is almost impossible for anyone to imitate.
On the other hand
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but made.From my own experienceAccept space
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I did observe and hear about people who are born without being giftedAccept space
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but passion.Their way to success may painful and take a very long time of patience and persistenceAccept space
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Cristiano Ronaldo is a football playerAccept space
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in contrast
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his speed and skills are totally built on his hard training.
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