The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars?

The trend of possessing a personal vehicle is dramatically expanding. Due to various financing options available in the market, it became feasible for many people buying cars despite their salary bracket.
However
, the massive numbers of running
motor
over the road can be responsible for creating pollution. Because to accommodate massive amounts of the
car
on the street, the Government has to expand the road and that expansion happens possibly after chopping the tree, and trees are deemed essential to maintain the ecosystem.
Therefore
, I believe human life is more valuable than possessing a
car
. The increasing trend of
motor
cars
Suggestion
car
buying should be controlled and discouraged by increasing taxes and providing education to the dwellers by the State. It's often claimed that
automobile
Suggestion
the automobile
is the vital necessity of life. I agree, but at the same time, one has to think about at what cost?. I believe we cost our fellow and our lives at risk by having a
motor
vehicle. Undoubtedly, the majority of cars operate with the gas/petrol, and upon burning the energy source, emit a considerable amount of carbon monoxide gas, which is poisonous and responsible for damaging the whole airway system from nose to lungs of humankind and our pets. Much research has proved that without trees, the gas accumulates in the atmosphere and leads to air pollution.
Therefore
, to control
this
problem, the Government has to take initiatives
such
as launch a free campaign of the education program and showing the movies to the people about the detrimental effect of air pollution on public health. Another problem I believe, persuade the people to buy more vehicles with different financing schemes. The
motor
companies attract people to buy more cars either for their families or trade-off their existing one with zero meters with a secure lease or loan system.
For example
, the way the companies sways people with no down payment; no instalment payment for 12 months; 100 dollar payment biweekly for 30,000 sedans; free machine service for one year; free battery replacement, and many more. These schemes attracted people to buy new vehicles with modern gadgets. But the point, people
usually forget
Suggestion
usually forgets
that; what will happen to their old
motor
in case, when they trade-off.
For instance
, according to a report in Geographic magazine that plastic from the
car
scrape takes thousands of years to vanish from the atmosphere. To curb
this
problem, the Government has to increase the duty on cars, stop advertisements from the media and control the
car
companies to provide
such
enticing deals to the customer for their frivolous interest.
Consequently
make challenging for the people to buy cars. Despite some benefits, the excessive number of cars on the road jeopardizes people's health by their emitting fumes and the disposable
car
plastic material. For that matter, the Government should take the initiative to educate the public by a different method and accountable the
car
companies to limit their sales by increasing the taxes.
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