A larger number of deaths are caused by road accidents. Why do so many road accidents occur? Make recommendations that would help reduce the number of road accidents.

#deaths #road #accidents #recommendations

Road

accident

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has been

mammath problem

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a mammoth problem

mammoth problem

in the world which caused a number of deaths.

This

happened

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happening

because of bad

road

maintenance and

government

has

chalk

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chalked

out plan to mitigate

this

problem by giving punishment to the public. Now, I will explain my ideas in the upcoming paragraphs. The main reason of

road

accidents is poor

road

condtion

the prevailing context that influences the performance or the outcome of a process

conditions

. There are

number

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a number

of potholes on the

road

which make driving dangerous and less secure.

Moreover

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there is no separate lane for two wheeler like for bicycles and

moterbikes

small motorcycle with a low frame and small wheels and elevated handlebars

motorbikes

. To cite an example, according to

Johnstone who

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Johnstone, who

researched in the Oxford University and conclude that about half of the

road

accidents are caused due to bad

maintainece

activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

maintenance

of roads. There are many ways to solve

this

problem. Like,

government

should give punishment to drunk drives and who drives the vehicles

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with

high speed.

This

punishment must be in the form of penalties and fines. Apart from

this

, individuals should

also

support within

government

oder

(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed

order

to reduce

road

accidents

likewise

they can give money and they have to services of the vehicles time to time by checking tires

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breakes

a braking device consisting of a combination of interacting parts that work to slow a motor vehicle

brakes

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steering and lights. To conclude, I believe my opinion is moderate and should be followed. Today

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people and

government

need to work on the above mentioned solutions to achieve

this

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

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213 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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