In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving older railway lines.

It is a common belief that investing

money

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on constructing new

railway

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lines between cities is more necessary rather than spending

money

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on improving existing public transport.

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, I personally believe that spending

money

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on

exisiting

presently existing

existing

public

transportation

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would be more beneficial for both individual and

government

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. On the one hand, investing

money

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on building new

railway

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lines can have

positive effect

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a positive effect

on people's lives.

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is because people these days are suffering from using public

transportation

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due to

the short

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the shortness

of public transports available, especially during the rush hour.

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, constructing more convenient public transports like new subway would accommodate a great many people during the rush hour that was the issue when not having enough public transports available.

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, investing

large amount

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large amounts

a large amount

of

money

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on constructing new

railway

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line could be a huge burden for both individuals and

government

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.

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is because distribution

money

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by

government

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on new

railway

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lines comes from tax revenue that citizens pay. In order to do it, a lot of

money

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could be imposed on a great many domestic households to pay

tax

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taxes

and

such

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problem could make citizens get into troubles in terms of the view of

government

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.

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, existing public transports

should be recommend

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should recommend

to use it for people to alleviate

this

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problem.

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is because current public transports that we use already have been

accommdating

helpful in bringing about a harmonious adaptation

accommodating

a number of those who use public

transportation

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. To sum up,

although

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a lot of people insist that investing on new

railway

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lines will be beneficial for people in need, just using existing public

transportation

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would be enough for both individuals and

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government

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governments

the government

in terms of costs.