Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Every company has general criteria or requirements for recruiting employees of their company. There are criteria that allow employees to work independently and innovative and
also
, there are criteria that allow employees to
working
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work
in a team and can follow the instruction. From these two criteria, there are two different views where the criteria depend on the company's capacity and goals. There are several factors why companies have criteria that employees are able to work independently and innovative.
Firstly
, people who are innovative are certainly those who are rich in bright or creative ideas, enterprising in learning, love to do experiments, quickly solve problems, and think rationally. In
this
case, innovative aims to provide more value to a new product or idea.
Secondly
, people who are able to work independently are certainly aimed at reducing the risk of errors in communication, employees understand their job, can manage their job time well and the job that does require a higher focus.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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