As the world becomes technologically advanced computers are replacing more and more jobs.Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers and discuss at least one problem that may result.

In
this
present scenario, it is believed by people that technology has been spread their arms around the globe and it changes many things, like culture, tradition and so on. Computers
also
have been taken the place of numerous jobs which was done hard working people.
This
essay will highlight some major jobs which converted into
this
electronic machine and
also
bad repercussions which affect the worker's life. To commence with, there are manifold jobs which have been replaced in the form of
computer
.Some years ago, mostly all teachers used blackboard during teaching in the classroom, but in modern times it has converted into the projector system where students not only hear the audio, but
also
visual with their eyes.Through,
this
they easily understand the topic.
For example
, in foreign countries
this
approach is used in almost all schools and
this
is the reason that students have more active and educated as compared to Indian students.
Moreover
, some jobs of the salesman, accounted and many more transformed into the
computer
.Even, the job of postman
also
in danger as, mostly youth sends the email sent through the social media or any message any time and anywhere.
Therefore
, many jobs has turned into
this
electronic machine. Apart from that,
this
change puts a worse impact on the employers and
also
disperse the starvation all around.Whom workers fully depend on their jobs which is accomplished by their hands, but when it's turned into the
computer
that time they have no other option to sit freely at home or doing the work of the labourer because some employers have less knowledge about modern equipment.Many workmen
also
lose their livelihood and few who accept the defeat in front of these types of situations they commit crime,
such
as robbery.
Hence
, several problems arise in the world for
this
change. In the end, even though the
computer
is beneficial and time saving machine
also
nowadays almost everybody has a
computer
, but the authority should arrange that kind of jobs which cannot be replaced in the
computer
so that employees can earn huge profits in their jobs.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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