With increased population communicating via internet and text message, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?

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I really agree with

this

statement. Many people communicate with others around the world through the

internet

easily.It is more and more popular. Nowadays people can send text messages and

face

communication by using the

internet

, so it became an

avoidable

Suggestion

avoiding

factor in our life.Many advantages with technology. People connect to computers or smartphones via the

internet

fastly

with rapid movements

quickly

and they can communicate with others anywhere in the world and at any time.Many software companies conduct

face

interviews by using the

internet

and employees are able to work from home by using the net.

For

example I

Accept comma addition

example, I

work as a software developer in a MNC company and I will work from home 3

day

Suggestion

days

per a week.

On the other hand

, some people think that

this

technology spoils the relationship between humans because they spend more time on mobile phones only and they are addicted to gadgets. So they do not talk to others directly. Sometimes people contact strangers, so they put their life in danger.

For instance

, recently I saw a news article where one girl communicated with an unknown person and he gathered personal information from her. After he started

blackmail

Suggestion

blackmailing

to her. To conclude, the

internet

is a very vital factor in our daily basis and many uses are there and

also

every one

all people

everyone

should take care of using it.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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226 words

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