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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

#summarise #information #features #comparisons
The chart provides information regarding what
type
 of destination doing
by
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with
 students who
gradutaes
receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduate
graduated
 from anthropology; and the table shows the
range
 of salaries getting from different
type
 of
employment
 sector- Government Sector, Freelance consultants, Private companies after 5
years'
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years' work
work
. Overall, After completing their anthropology
,
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,
 most students get full-time
work
, whereas Part-time
work
 + Postgrad study made up the least destination among them. The table clearly shows that all
employment
sector providing
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sector, providing
similar percentage
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a similar percentage
 of salary in the both huge and
least
immediately past
last
 category of salary. As
pie chart
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the pie chart
 shows, Destination of Full-time
work
 plays a major role and contributes more than half of the proportion, having 52%.
This
 is followed by Part-time
work
 with a huge difference of nearly %, accounted for 15%.The
third
 position was given to Unemployed with 12%.
Surprisngly
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Surprisingly
, Both Full-time
postgrad
of or relating to studies beyond a bachelor's degree
postgraduate
 study and Not
known accounted
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known, accounted
 for
same rate
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the same rate
 of 8%. There was
a
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an
 almost 48% difference between
least
a database containing an ordered array of items (names or topics)
list
 (Part-time
work
 +
postgrad
of or relating to studies beyond a bachelor's degree
postgraduate
 study) and most destination role
(
Accept space
(
Full-time
work
). Moving to
table
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the table
, In the category of more than $100,000, All
type
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types
 of
employment
 contributes almost similar
range
 with the highest contribution by Government Sector (50%) and the lowest contribution
(
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(
30%). But
this
 was changed when compare with
salary
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salary ranges
range
 between $ 25,000 - 49,999.
;
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;
Both Freelance consultants and Government sector provide just 5%, whereas private companies offer 10%.
Rest
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The rest
 of the
range
 of salaries- ($50,000 - 74,999)
,
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,
($75,000 - $99,999) almost all
type
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types
 of
employment
 have
similar proportion
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similar proportions
a similar proportion
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Pattern
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Comparison
  • Relationship
  • Correlation
  • Significant
  • Implication
  • Prediction
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