Rich countries are getting richer while poor countries are getting poorer. what is the cause of this

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Currently developed nations are getting
wealthy whereas
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wealthy, whereas
impoverished nations are impoverishing day by day. Due to
impact
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the impact
of
technology
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and
education
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, some countries have turned to modern ones. They are improving
technology
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as
technology
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can cover economy and social development. That’s why they are allocating a great deal of budget on
technology
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and
education
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system
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. When it comes to
education
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,
education
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produces experienced and talented cadre which means that having a qualified and qualitative study can help to work
easy
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easily
in
variety
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a variety
of jobs. As a consequence the attempts are showing their very good result at present.
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However some
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However, some
people think that poor countries are getting poorer. Because they opt for only political affairs, political matters,
low
the collection of rules imposed by authority
law
, constitution and so on.
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, little attention is paid to the
education
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system
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, and contracts for young people are
also
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inadequate and the role of
technology
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is unsatisfactory.
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, the
government
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has not provided with
technology
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for the educational places, it includes university, school as well as college. As a consequence, country’s reputation is not growing. It is important that action is taken to combat these problems. In order to progress,
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Government
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the Government
has to take into consideration to
education
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and
technology
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as well as entrepreneurship.
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First step
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The first step
is adequate budget allocation
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of
for
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education
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the education system
system
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. If
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education
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the education system
system
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is old they have to plan
new
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a new
one, on the planning new one it requires lots of money. It is important that the
government
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assumes
this
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responsibility.
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,
role
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the role
of
technology
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should be the major which means that,
government
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have to equip with modern
technology
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and other equipments to educational places. It can help them to do something not only theoretical but
also
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practical. Practicality is one of the most important things for productivity.
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, students can get advice from another country’s
tutors
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tutor
and professors. It is chance to implement their goals.
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, business and marketing
also
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can contribute to the development of the state. The
government
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should introduce lending to young cadres.
This
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means that, if they have the money, they can begin their new project and business.
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Apart
from
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,
this
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is an opportunity for the unemployed to get a job. All these factors contribute to the growth of the state.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial assistance
  • technological assistance
  • economic gap
  • basic needs
  • healthcare
  • education
  • infrastructure
  • global stability
  • diplomatic relations
  • global cooperation
  • dependency
  • self-sufficiency
  • strings attached
  • political decisions
  • economic decisions
  • sovereignty
  • tension
  • mismanagement
  • corruption
  • intended purpose
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