Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?

The role of artists and artistic activities in transmitting values and bringing joy through harmony,

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, modern life and society may depreciate its value and importance.

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they deserve to be well-paid, the payments to many of the artists have usually been less than the average income and they require the financial support of the government. It is my strong belief that for a variety of

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the financial support for artistic activity is a necessity.

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with, it is difficult to make a living as an artist. For one thing, most artists tend to be self-employed and they would not prefer to work for someone else, for another, expenses of holding big displays and exhibitions might oblige them to spend huge sums of money.

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, they are bound to be to take out

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a bank loan

to afford those expenses. In fact, the majority of them are barely surviving financially without governments subside and support.

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, professional artists can be a viable role model for school children as well as the whole society. If they were unable to cover their living and work expenses, the tendency to become an artist would be less and less and among youths and art would be disappeared gradually in the long term.

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, the status of artists should be legislatively protected from economic recession and inflation by governments. To sum up, lack of sufficient and regular income for individuals are not acceptable and artists are not an exception. It seems to me that financial supports and funding for artists should be given high priority in

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the government’s plans

since life without art is dull and incomplete.