Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

The identification of main roots and incentives of committing crimes

have always been

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has always been

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a challenging

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issue particularly

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issue, particularly

immediately after releasing from jail. While

relaxation

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the relaxation

of criminal laws can be the major contributing factors to the

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of criminal activities, it seems to me that the investigation of

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involving social as well as economic factors

socioeconomic

background can be beneficial to both the identification of incentives and providing potential solutions to the

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, economic

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prolonged unemployment coupled with social injustice and inequality are likely to give for individuals an incentive to the

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of law breaking.

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, lack of a proper family life and family breakdown as well as alcohol and drug abuse might be a good excuse for breaking the law for many times. More importantly, being in prison

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an opportunity to gain experience from persistent offenders for those who carried out minor crimes. For one thing, they might be

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exposed

to blame for being criminal, for another, they are likely unable to be employed for long term after releasing.

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the first step

a first step

to deal with the

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is to take into account the roots of committing a crime successively. With considering the origin of the

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, a variety of solutions may put forward. Despite toughening related laws, community punishment should be adopted for less serious offenders in order to prevent from

successive occurrence

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the successive occurrence

of criminal actions.

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, more effective programs to re-educate

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-time offenders should be designed and run. If equal job opportunities provided for them and income levels increased, they would become reluctant to the

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of crimes.

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, economic and deterrent measures should be given high priority simultaneously. By way of conclusion,

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there has been a variety of incentives and solutions to the

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issue, it

is my personal belief that tackling the issues of the

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of criminal actions requires a long term plan and cooperation of different kinds of organizations in the society.